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Re: Muse (working title)
Puts mine to shame. :Shakes head: It's good. The only thing I would change is the rhythm in the last line. It seems a little short.
Feb 27, 2007
Puts mine to shame. :Shakes head: It's good. The only thing I would change is the rhythm in the last line. It seems a little short.
Feb 27, 2007