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Sumi H. Inkblot

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Muse (working title)

    Puts mine to shame. :Shakes head: It's good. The only thing I would change is the rhythm in the last line. It seems a little short.

    Feb 27, 2007


I want to see people turn and writhe; make them feel things they cannot see and sometimes do not know.
— Anna Held